> Repetition and redundancy, ambiguity, illogical ordering of content, rambling sentences, opaque grammar.
Repetition AND redundancy?
Illogical ordering in an unordered list of things.
Rambling (could be more items or less).
What's the grammar of a sentence like this? Diagramming it would be a challenge. I'd call that opaque.
> Repetition and redundancy, ambiguity, illogical ordering of content, rambling sentences, opaque grammar.
Repetition AND redundancy?
Illogical ordering in an unordered list of things.
Rambling (could be more items or less).
What's the grammar of a sentence like this? Diagramming it would be a challenge. I'd call that opaque.