This isn't a draft for a law though, this is a petition to create such a draft. These kinds of critique are kinda premature - even if they're done by Internet famous people like pirate software
If it causes enough in-fighting to turn people off, then I'd say the critiques are needed. There's already so much going against the law without the people themselves wondering if this would force their favorite MMO to shut down.
Yeah yeah, but that doesn't explain the grammar of the sentence fragment I quoted and italicized. I still don't understand what that bit is supposed to mean. Can you explain it?